I really want to love this game, but the monospace font is just killing me. Sorry. After a couple of pages, I have to stop reading and unclench my jaw and shoulders.
Also, the justified formatting AND the bold first word (even when there's absolutely no sense to highlight them) turn the text even more difficult to read.
i see. i did design it in a way that i find readable, but it makes sense that what is readable to each person is different. i may work on an updated version in the future with better readability.
Love the attention you put to the feedback. Have a 💜 day!
PS: I did proofreading and counseling for mechanics and layout for lot of (small) authors and translators, here in Italy. I just want to tell you that you can find awesome suggestions about font choice and page composition, and you can learn a lot, really quickly. This is just an example or two: https://www.canva.com/learn/the-ultimate-guide-to-font-pairing/
oh thank you for these links, they are very informative. burning hearts forever's anniversary is coming this month so i figured an alternative formatting would be a nice anniversary update.
This game looks fantastic, it's got some of the best elements of all my favorite pbta systems! I'm really looking forward to trying it at some point, but I'm not gonna risk an in depth read right now when I just started a couple other games - I don't wanna get pulled away from them lol. Well done on crafting such an exciting and interesting rpg!!!
I just want to say how much I love this game and I think it would be super fun to play. There is SO much narrative depth to the game mechanics and I urge you to read through it and give it a chance even if it looks and feels a little crunchy. I think it's got a lot of potential!
I'm currently planning out a campaign to run for my sister and her friends in about a month, and we are all really excited about the potential this system has. This version does not have character sheets at the time of writing, but the concepts are simple enough that it likely won't take me long to throw together a really simple one. I'll definitely send you feedback Eva when we start!
play tester here! the system is still in development, but overall, it's been great to play so far. the structure and system are easy to apply to a number of settings, and are meant to be good for homebrew sessions. i'm still play testing it as a player, but i'm looking forward to playing with this more, including possibly gming with it!
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How many players do you recommend for your game? 4-6 (+GM)?
about 3-5 + a game master, yeah
Alright, thank you! ^-^
I really want to love this game, but the monospace font is just killing me. Sorry. After a couple of pages, I have to stop reading and unclench my jaw and shoulders.
Also, the justified formatting AND the bold first word (even when there's absolutely no sense to highlight them) turn the text even more difficult to read.
i see. i did design it in a way that i find readable, but it makes sense that what is readable to each person is different. i may work on an updated version in the future with better readability.
Love the attention you put to the feedback. Have a 💜 day!
PS: I did proofreading and counseling for mechanics and layout for lot of (small) authors and translators, here in Italy.
I just want to tell you that you can find awesome suggestions about font choice and page composition, and you can learn a lot, really quickly.
This is just an example or two:
https://www.canva.com/learn/the-ultimate-guide-to-font-pairing/
https://practicaltypography.com/page-layout.html
oh thank you for these links, they are very informative. burning hearts forever's anniversary is coming this month so i figured an alternative formatting would be a nice anniversary update.
Played a one-shot of this with some friends and it was the most fun I've had gm'ing!! I can't wait to play it again :-)
This game looks fantastic, it's got some of the best elements of all my favorite pbta systems! I'm really looking forward to trying it at some point, but I'm not gonna risk an in depth read right now when I just started a couple other games - I don't wanna get pulled away from them lol. Well done on crafting such an exciting and interesting rpg!!!
I just want to say how much I love this game and I think it would be super fun to play. There is SO much narrative depth to the game mechanics and I urge you to read through it and give it a chance even if it looks and feels a little crunchy. I think it's got a lot of potential!
I'm currently planning out a campaign to run for my sister and her friends in about a month, and we are all really excited about the potential this system has. This version does not have character sheets at the time of writing, but the concepts are simple enough that it likely won't take me long to throw together a really simple one. I'll definitely send you feedback Eva when we start!
I'm glad you're going to play and I hope you have fun!
play tester here! the system is still in development, but overall, it's been great to play so far. the structure and system are easy to apply to a number of settings, and are meant to be good for homebrew sessions. i'm still play testing it as a player, but i'm looking forward to playing with this more, including possibly gming with it!
oh! it makes me really happy to know people are playing my game and enjoying it!